420W Journal#2 Topic#5

• It seems that people can hardly arrive at the agreement on the question whether watching a movie in the theater or watching a DVD at home.Some people may assert that watching a movie in the theater while others agree that watcing DVD at home.As far as I’m concerned watching a movie in the theater is a good choice.
• To begin with the theater is a speical place to watching a movie,all the equipments are much more professional than at home.For example the silver screen,cineprojector and sounder.If you watch a DVD at home you only hve a TV and a DVD player.What's more the theater has a good condition to watch a movie,all the audiences are watching the movie intently,you can't be disturbed by anyone.If you watch a DVD at home you can hardl pay attention,you may be disturbed by many things. Last but not least in the dark theater you can feel that yourself is in the scenario.If you watch a DVD at home you can't make the living room dark absolutely.
• By contrast watching a movie in the theater is much better than watching a DVD at home.But to be admited watching a DVD at home is cheaper and more convenient than go to the theater.
• Based on the above analysis if you want to enjoy the the movie you should go to the theater.

420W Journal1 Topic4

It is as clear as crystal that Vancouver is a modern city,so there all kinds of things really impress the people.But personly speaking there's only one thing that really rock me,the cars.It is no exaggeration to say that a life without cars is inconceivable.To most of the people cars are only the vehicle,but to me cars are work of art.When I satand at a any street of Vancouver there are lots of beautiful cars go likethe wind.It is widely acknowledged that Vancouver is the most comfortbale city to live.So there're many toffs live in the city.Thus,it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that there're lots of excellent cars in this city.But the quantity and quality really surprise me.The PORSCHE 911 turbo, CORVETTE Z06,FORD MUSTANG to name just a few.The powerful engine,beautful color,attractive aspect,seductive sound really make me feel that my blood is boiling.To put it like this stand at the street of Vancouver is much better than the cars show in my hometown.There's only one word best describe it,breathtaking!

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