Monday, November 3, 2008

420W Jaurnal#3 Topic#2

For me,the 42oW course is like a warm family.All the classmates are friendly,aspirant and honest.Our teacher also like a "mother",she teach us how to write an academic writing.We enjoy every class.I have learned lots of useful knowledge so far.For instance,I have learned how to write a perfect topic sentence with cogent controlling ideas,how to write the different supporting sentences,how to write a wonderful concluding sentence.And I also learned three different kind of the paragraph,the decription paragraph,the compare-contrast paragraph and cause-effect paragraph.These knowledge are really helpful.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I agree with what you said.You really did a good job.------Yao

Eilidh said...

I am glad that you feel you are progressing in the class, and I look forward to seeing youy develop your paragraphs into essays. whether you are writing a paragraph or an essay, always try and write a well-developed piece of writing with examples, descriptions and good organization.